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  I will Remember you Parts 1-4
 Posted: 04/24/02 09:11
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Here is a fic I wrote a while back. I hope you enjoy.
Peace out. (Remember. Nothing is what it seems)

Title: I will remember you
Author: Mary
Rating: PG 13 I Guess lol
Categories: M&M, M&L, I&K
Disclaimer: I don't own anyone I guess they own themselves. Ok so I own Jamie and Bradley and anyone else I care to create later on. ;)
Summary: This Fic Takes place in the future (Like most my fics ;) ) None of the "Gang" has really seen each other in years they all moved away and lost contact but something tragic brings them all together again.
Feed back: OF Course... FEED ME!

~Chapter one~

"Come on we have to go!" Liz called from across the hall

"All right, All right I'm coming!" Jamie yelled while putting a jacket on and heading out the door to meet Liz in the hallway outside their dorm room.

"Look, If we don't leave now w-" Liz gets interrupted by the telephone

"I'll get that, Its probably for me anyway." Jamie rushes back into their room and picks up the phone "Hello?" she turns looking at Liz "Ya, here she is."

Liz takes the phone and speaks into it "Hello?" she hears a voice, it sounds so familiar...

"Who is it Liz?.. Your boyfriend?." Jamie laughs

Tears start to form in Liz's eyes "Ya, I'm on my way." She hangs up to look at Jamie

"Liz what's wrong?" sounding deeply concerned
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Kyle walks in the door of the night club to see Maria up on stage singing her heart out...

"You know I'm better breathing on my own." Maria looks out into the crowd after finishing her song to see Kyle standing near the door way of the club. She rushes off stage to meet him "Kyle!"

"Hey." He says plainly

She hugs him "Kyle It's been like forever." She smiles

He doesn't smile "Ya, Hey Look we have to talk."

She frowns "Kyle Is something wrong?"

He leans in close to her whispering something into her ear looking visibly upset

She puts her hand over her mouth and gasps "No..." Her eyes fill with tears

Kyle grabs Maria into the form of a hug as she cries on his shoulder

Isabel who looks like she's been crying for well over an hour walks in the club "Kyle." She says softly

He releases his hug on Maria and turns looking at Isabel

She lowers her head "We should go."

"Right." He replies "Maria please say you'll c-"

"Of course, I'll uh follow you guys up." She interrupts

Michael's phone rings waking him up

He rolls off his bed onto the floor hitting his head "Dammit!, Who's calling at this hour?" He picks up the phone "Hello?"

He hears a familiar voice...

"Michael there's someth-"

"Maxwell." Michael interrupts

"Look, I know we haven't talked since t-"

"Save it Maxwell." He interrupts again "I don't want an apology from you."

"Michael will you just shut up and listen?" Max begins "That's not why I'm calling."

"Fine then, Just get to the point."

"Something happened..."
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"Are you sure you don't want me to come along?" Jamie asks

"I'm sure." Liz says when a single tear rolls down her cheek

"Liz, I'm worried about you."

"I'm fine." she says plainly

"Ok." She grabs Liz and hugs her "I'm really sorry Liz."

"It's not your fault."

"I know, I just feel so bad for you."

"I haffta go now or I'll miss my flight but, I'll be back in a couple days."

"Ya, Ok bye."

"Bye."
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"Kyle?"

Kyle turns his head slightly looking at Isabel "Ya?"

"Are you ok?"

He looks straight ahead at the long road as his eyes fill with tears "N-no."

A tear rolls off her face "God Kyle I'm so sorry."

"I wish I was there when it happened."

"Why?"

"Maybe I could have stopped it."

"Ky-"

"It's My fault... I know it is." he interrupts

"No, Kyle its not, why would you think that?"

"I left Isabel." A strong stream of tears slide down his face "If I hadn't maybe this could have been prevented."

"Kyle, It's not your fault." She reaches over and slides her hand down his cheek whipping away his tears "It's not."
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Maria stares straight ahead with no emotion on her face what so ever. Her cell phone begins to ring

"H-hello?" She says sounding heart broken

"Maria... I-I." Liz begins crying over the phone "There something I have to tell you."

"I already know Liz."

"Oh."

"Look, Liz I don't really fell like talking right now."

"Bye." Liz says sounding more upset then ever

Maria hangs up the phone and tosses it in the passenger seat of the car
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Max walks into the hospital room to see Valenti... he looks so limp

"Hey." Max tries to smile

"Hey." Valenti coughs

Max walks a little closer "How are you doing?"

He sits up "I'm ok."

"Tell me the truth."

"Look Max, If you just came here to lecture me." Valenti smiles

"No, It's nothing like that I'm just wor-"

"Dad!" Kyle interrupts while walking through the door with Isabel at his side

"Kyle, son."

Kyle walks over to give his dad a hug "You ok?"

"Well,...I've been better."

Isabel and Max exchange a look
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"Maria." Michael says softly

Maria turns looking him in the eye "Michael?"

He walks toward her "I waited out here for you."

"Oh, um." She scrunches up her forehead "Which room is his?"

He looks at her read face he knows she's been crying. "That one." He says while pointing to an open door on the right.

She walks into the room with Michael close behind...

"H-hey." She looks at around to see everyone but Liz

"Maria... Michael, Hey." Valenti says
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Hours Later...

Everyone just sits in opposite sides of the room with their arms crossed, everyone besides Michael and Valenti that is. Michael fell a sleep after about two hours of silence and Valenti continues to lay limp in the bed, looking pale and ill. The sound of Michael snoring seemed to be getting louder by the minute and the awkward silence got Isabel out of the room and into the large empty waiting room.

"Isabel..."

Isabel turns to see Kyle looking down at her "Hey."

"I thought you might want a soda." He says while handing her an off brand cola

"Ya, thanks." She takes it "God, could this get any weirder? I mean Max he hasn't said two words since we got here, and Maria she's quiet...too quiet, and how can Michael sleep at a time like this? Sometimes Kyle it seems your the only one I can relate to."

"Isabel get up."

"Wh--Ok..." She stands up in front of him

He puts his hands on her shoulders "Just come back into the room ok?"

"Why? What's the point nothings going to change everyone's just going to be silent and stare at each other like a bunch of little kids."

"Look, I thought you where here because my dad was sick not because you wanted to resolve this crap with Michael and Max"

"I am here because he's sick, But-"

"No buts, Just get in there and pay your respects... for me."

"Ok." She sighs.

"Thank you." He kisses her fore head and grabs her hand as they walk back into the room together

Isabel sits down next to Max "Hey."

He turns to look at her "I thought you'd still be mad at me."

"Well I am, I Just thought we could talk."

"So, are you and Kyle um...?"

"Yes, but you can't change the subject that easily."

Max looks at her with this odd guilty look in his eyes. She can't read him, she could always read him. She often wondered if things would have been better between her and Max if Tess hadn't come.

"Max, What's wrong with him?" She asks sounding scared

"I-I don't know." Max replies with a horrible look of guilt in his eyes.

"It's not your fault Max." She gently lays her hand on his shoulder.

"But it is, Iz."

Valenti sits up in his bed and coughs

Kyle runs over toward him "Dad? Are you ok?"

"I'm fine. I Just need some sleep, you kids should go."

"Are you sure?" Max says while standing up next to his bed

"Ya, don't worry about a hotel you guys can stay at my place."

"Dad, That's ok we c-"

"I won't hear of it, the keys are in my coat pocket over there." He says while pointing to his worn jean jacket hanging on a hook on the bathroom door.

Kyle walks over to the coat and grabs the keys out of the right pocket "Well, Ok free room and board I guess." Kyle smiles, he hadn't smiled ever since he had heard the news.

"I love you son." Valenti promised himself he would make sure Kyle knew how he felt about him, and he figured this might be his last chance. "And I'm so proud of the man you've become." A tear forms in his eye.

"I love you too dad." He hugs his father while nearly crying

Isabel and Kyle walk towards the door way

Maria looks over at the sleeping Michael in the chair next to her and elbows him hard

Michael stops snoring and slowly lifts his head up with drool dangling off his chin "Uh-mm." He mumbles

"Michael, it's time to go." Maria says while gathering her things

"Oh, Ya right lets go." He stubble's to his feet

Maria stands up "You coming Max?"

"Ya, I'll be right there."

"Ok."

Isabel, Kyle, Maria, and Michael all leave the hospital room to head to the old Valenti house hold

"I am so sorry."

"Look, Max it's not your fault this happened. You should go catch up with the others."

"No, It is my fault."

"Max, you tried to heal me it just didn't work that's all."

"No, I tried to heal you, and I made you get worse. I made you get weaker and I keep thinking that if you die it will be my fault." Max says while tearing up.

"Max, just go get some sleep. You can come back in the morning"
-
"Excuse me, which room is Jim Valenti in?"

"Let me check dear." The elderly nurse types up something on her computer

Liz impatiently taps her fingers on the counter.

"Ok, go up one level and its the first door on your right... room 103." She smiles

"Thank you." Liz rushes upstairs to his room to find two young nurses cleaning it out and putting new sheets on the beds. Liz walks up to one of the nurses "Excuse me miss."

She turns looking at Liz "Yes?"

"This is Jim Valenti's room isn't it?" Liz looks a little worried "Was he moved?"

The nurse lays the sheets down "I'm so sorry dear." And takes a step closer to her "He passed in his sleep last night."

Liz gasps

"Are you his daughter?"

"No, Just a friend." tears begin to roll down Liz's red cheeks

"Where's my Bradley?" An elderly lady enters the room walking over to the second empty bed.

"Was your son in here Ma'am?" A second nurse asks.

"Yes, his name was Bradley he was in this bed." She smiles "Where is he?"

"He was released this morning." The nurse smiles "He just all of the sudden got much better."

Liz hears a familiar voice coming from the hallway, It was getting closer. Was it? No, It couldn't be she peeked her head out of the doorway. Yes, It was... Max. She stepped out of the room to find him walking straight towards her "Max." She begins

"Liz, you made it." Max smiled so happily to see her

"Valenti..." She begins crying "He didn't make it, I didn't even get to see him before he-"

"What, No he-" Max looks in at the empty room "How.." His eyes begin to fill with tears

Kyle and Isabel walk up last "What's going on?" Kyle asks

"Kyle..." Max just looks at him with guilt filled eyes.

"No..." He runs into the empty room "No, he's my dad he can't just die!"

"Kyle, Lets just go." Isabel bends down next to him.

He leans up against the wall and slowly slides down to the floor "No, He's just in another room that's all..." He begins to cry

"God Kyle I'm so sorry." She hugs him

"No, he's not dead he can't be... we just saw him last night."

"Kyle, lets just go."

"No, Its my fault... It's all my fault" He walks out of the room


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  I will Remember you Parts 1-4
 Posted: 04/24/02 09:14
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Ok this entire chapter is one hell of a giant flash back. (Just so you understand he he.) Peace out.

~Chapter two~

"I have to save my son." The words kept repeating over and over again in her mind, she could still see the image of Max and Tess together at the prom, and she felt so betrayed when Max had told her what was really going on.

Liz laid her head against the head board of her bed and gently closed her eyes.

"Knock, Knock!" Liz's Mom creaks open the door.

Liz sits up and tries to smile "Hey."

"You ready to go sweetheart?"

"Ya." Liz picks up her bags and follows her Mom out to the car.

"Are you sure you want to do this?" Her Mom asks while starting the car.

"I'm sure Mom, I just need to get away from him."

"Max?"

"Ya." Liz leans her head on the window and stares silently
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"Kyle! Kyle! get back here!." Jim runs out of the house after his son.

Kyle turns to look at his father. "Dad, I can't stay here anymore."

"Son, I know T-"

"It hurts to much I can't stay here." He interrupts

"Kyle Just liste-"

"No Dad you listen, Tess was like my sister, she lived in our house. God she killed Alex...I see her kill him over and over again every time I walk into that room."

Jim lowers his head. "Kyle, don't do this please."

"I'm sorry Dad, I have to." Kyle puts his things in his car and drives off.
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"No Michael, we all chose a side." Maria says while packing her bags

"Look, I'm on your side here Maria." He starts to pull her clothes out of the bag

She turns looking at him. "No, your not on my side you'll never be on my side Michael. You will always be on Max and Isabel's side, and you know that's the truth." She finishes packing and walks out to her car.

He follows her "Maria, just wait a minute."

She puts her stuff in the car "Get over it Michael. I'm not your destiny I never was."

"I-"

"Look, Max moved on... and you should too." She gets in her car

He watches her leave with this horrible look of hurt on his face
-
Max wakes up to someone knocking on his window, he opens it to find...

"Michael?" he looks a little surprised

Michael pushes his way into his room "Maxwell, do you realize what you've done?"

"What are you talking about?"

"You ruined my life!"

"Mic-"

"She left Maxwell."

"Who left?"

"Maria, she left me because of you!"

"Look M-"

Michael punches him in the face knocking him onto the floor "I hate you."
-
Isabel hears a thud and runs upstairs to Max's room. "Max what happened?" She bends down next to him.

"Michael..." he says while pointing to the window

Isabel looks at the open window and crawls out it to find Michael walking toward the street "Michael."

He stops but doesn't turn "What?"

"What happened back there?"

He turns and takes a few steps closer to her "How can you be on his side Iz?"

"I-I'm not on anyone's side Michael."

"Then Choose a side!" He says harshly

"I can't Michael, I love you both."

"Fine, but just remember Isabel, Max slept with the enemy...and the enemy killed Alex." He walks off leaving her alone outside the house.

Isabel begins to cry softly
-
Flight 382 to Florida boarding now...

Liz stands up "That's my flight."

"I'm going to miss you so much." Her mom's eyes begin to fill with tears

"It's the best thing Mom I promise." She hugs her "I love you."

"I love you too honey." She releases her tight grip "Call me as soon as you get there ok?"

"I will, don't worry." Liz heads for the door to board the plane

"Oh and tell your Aunt Meg I said hi." She yells

Liz boards the plane, sits down in her seat and stares out the window as it flies out of Roswell New Mexico.
-
"10 dollars on pump..." Kyle looks out side then back at the young cashier "3, and this." He says while putting a map up on the counter along with a fountain drink and a candy bar.

"Ok." She smiles while ringing up his order. "That's 14 dollars and 56 cents."

He hands her 15 dollars "Here, and uh keep the change." He grabs his stuff then walks out to his car, once he gets in he unfolds the map looking it up and down then finally making a decision on where to go. "Watch out New Jersey... here I come." He smiles to himself then starts up the car.
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Ring... Ring... Ring...

Maria looks over at her cell phone laying in the passenger seat of the car, she picks it up and begins to speak "Michael, I told you not to call-"

"It's me."

She pauses for a moment "Look Max, I'm pissed off at you enough as it is without you making my phone bill higher." She says harshly

"Maria, That's not even why I'm calling, I just thought you might know where Liz is."

"Max, even if I did know I wouldn't tell you."

"Please, it's important."

"Get over yourself Max. She's not going to help you find your damn son, no one is." She shakes her head then hangs up.

Ring... Ring... Ring...

She picks up the phone again "Hello?"

"Where are you going Maria?"

"Max, Stop calling!." She hangs up on him yet again.

Ring... Ring... Ring...

"Danmit!" She picks up the phone "Look Max I'm going to change my number and file harassment if you don't stop calling me!"

"Maria..." She laughs "It's me, Liz."

"Oh, thank God Liz I thought you where Max."

"Why would Max be calling you?" Liz asks with a little bit of jealousy in her voice.

"He's been calling me asking if I know were you are."

"You didn't tell him anything did you?"

"Of course not, your secrets safe with me." She smiles.

"Look I have to go my bus is here, but call me as soon as you get to New York ok?"

"Ya, I should get there sometime tomorrow."

"Ok, bye."

"Bye." She tosses her phone back into the passenger seat.

Ring... Ring... Ring...

"Ugh!"
-
"Were sorry your call could not be completed as dialed."

"Danmitt!" Michael hangs up the phone and throws it across the room. "Why would Maria change her number?" he begins to think out loud "I'm going to kill Max!" he sighs. "I can't take it anymore, I'm outta here." He packs a small bag and heads out the door, to find Isabel walking towards him.

"Where ya going?" She asks

"Anywhere but here." He replies.

"Michael, don't leave."

He turns looking at her "Look Isabel you can stay here and help Max on his little parade but I'm through with it, he really pissed me off back there. He made me loose every thing, he made us all loose everything. How can you not see that?" he yells sharply

She looks up at him not knowing exactly what to say.

He gets on his motorcycle strapping the small bag over his shoulder "Some where deep down Isabel you know I'm right." He starts his bike and drives off.

Isabel watches him and then heads home.
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"Max?"

"It's open." Max says while reading the printout of the alien book.

Isabel walks into his room and gently pushes the door shut "I thought you should know, everyone's gone... they all left." She says sounding heartbroken.

He doesn't even lift his head up "I know."

She begins to cry "I'm sorry Max."

"About what?" His voice sounding sour

"I have to leave, I can't stand it anymore. I don't want to leave you Max but what you did... it really hurt me."

He stands up facing her. "Look Isabel I don't have time for this, I have to find out how to save my son!" He yells.
-
"Liz!"

"Hey!" She says extending her arms.

"How was your flight?" She asks while hugging Liz tight

She ends the hug "It was great, I can't wait to sleep in a bed though." She laughs.

"Ya, Ok lets take you home then." Her aunt smiles
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"Oh, this one's nice." Maria says while looking around.

"It has two bedrooms, one bath, a kitchen, and a living room." A short slightly bald man says.

"I'll take it."

"But I haven't even told you how much it cost." He says with an unusual accent.

"Ya, don't worry about it. My Mom and I have this whole money deal, she pays the first few months untill I have a good paying job."

"O-ok." He smiles "It's pretty expensive though."

"Ya like I said, It's covered."

"Are you sure this apartment is right for you though?" He asks

"I'm positive, and that answer's not going to change no matter how many times you ask." She responds totally sure of her self.

"How long you say you been in New York?" He asks while smiling

"A day, now can you please give me this place?"

"Ok." He sighs "I guess it's yours." He hands her a few papers and a pen. " But you have to sign these"
-
"What did you say your name was again?" A young man covered in oil asks.

"Kyle, Kyle Valenti."

"Kyle Valenti... Hum don't I know you from somewhere?"

"No, this is my first time in New Jersey."

"Where are you from then?"

"Roswell."

"Roswell, New Mexico? The place where the aliens crashed?"

"Well, Ya."

"Have you ever met one of those aliens?" He asks while chewing on a piece of straw

"Ya, right." He says sarcastically. "Is this part of the job interview or what?"

"Your hired, young sir." He laughs.

"Ya, Thanks." Kyle says while backing up then walking off
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Max gathers up all his alien artifacts, and some clothes. He stuffs them in a bag and heads out to his car. He then throws the stuff in the back, gets in and starts the car.

Isabel watches from inside the house. "Max." She whispers to her self. "Don't go, please don't leave me."

He pulls out of the drive.

She lowers her head and walks back into her room grabbing the bag she already had packed. "I guess this is it, I'm really going." She whispers.
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"There's not going to be any stripping involved right?" Maria asks while swallowing hard.

"Stripping?" A tall thin man turns looking at her with a funny look on his face "Of course not, this is just a regular ol' night club." He smiles then looks up at the sign hanging over the door witch reads 'Regular Ol' Night Club'.

"Ya, ok I'll do it then." She smiles then shakes his hand.

"Friday night ok with you little lady?" He asks while pulling out a little black book and jotting something down.

"Ya sure but um how much money would be involved?" She asks

"One hundred, a night." He replies simply.

"Dollars?" She asks while almost choking

"Well, yes but you see that's only if your good." He smirks.

"Oh I'm good." She smiles "You want me to uh..." She looks up at the stage then back at him.

"Be my guest." He winks.
-
"Ok, so does that mean you have an opening?"

"Of course!"

Isabel smiles "That's great, I could be in town in a little under a day."

"Oh dear." An elderly voice says sounding unsure

"What's wrong?"

"It might get sold before then dear."

"Oh." Isabel's smile turns into a frown

"Oh wait just a second dear, maybe I could hold it for you."

"Ya ok that would be great."

A few seconds later...

"Well, I talked to the manager and he said I could do just that."

"Really?" She smiles "It's New Jersey right?"

"Uh huh, could you be here by noon dear?"

"Sure, I'll see you then." Isabel smiles then hangs up the phone.
-

"I'll work for any amount of money."

"Any amount eh?"

"Well, enough to pay my bills of course." Michael sighs

"Of course." A short bald man with glasses responds. "So are you willing to work full time or just part time?"

"Full time, I guess." Michael says while leaning over the counter

"Ok, then you start tomorrow, I guess." He says while mocking Michael. He then smiles and hands him one of those annoying Mcdonalds hats.

"I don't have to wear that do I?" He asks while twirling it on his finger like a basket ball.

"Oh yes, you do." He smiles then walks into the back room.

"Great." He says sarcastically then walks out.
-
"Hello, what's your name?"

"Liz Parker." She smiles

"Ok, your doom room is 38B. It's a few halls over hun." A woman with fiery red hair and very thick glasses replies.

"Thanks." Liz smiles then walks down the very long halls untill she finds her room. When she opens her door she sees a young girl hanging boy band posters up all over the walls. "Um excuse me, this is my room."

The girl steps down holding a poster in her hand and turns looking at Liz "Hey! You must me Elisabeth." She extends her hand "I'm Jamie." She smiles.

Liz sits her bags down inside and shuts the door "Ya, you can just call me Liz if you'd like." She smiles then shakes hands with Jamie. "So big on the pop scene I see."

"Ya, I could take them down if-"

"No, there fine."
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"Hey! Excuse you!" Maria yells when a guy bumps into her while walking on the street "Geeze people don't even care anymore." She turns the corner hearing music getting louder... "That voice..." She sees a young man playing a guitar "No, way!" She smiles excitedly. "Billy?!"

He turns looking at her "Maria?" He sets his guitar down and hugs her "What are you doing here, I mean in New York?"

"Wait, I have a better question. What are you doing?" She looks down at his guitar case filled with money.

"Well, a guy's gotta make a living." He smiles
-
"Ugh, I hate malls." Kyle sighs, then looks at the store straight ahead the sign reading 'Isabel Evans'. "No, Way." He says with a stunned look on his face. He walks into the store to find Isabel trying to work the cash register.

"Uh! How does this thing work!?" She yells sounding very frustrated.

"Here, let me help you with that." He smiles big looking at her.

Isabel hears a familiar voice and looks up. "Kyle!" She says while running over towards him.

He reaches his arms out hugging her "So, uh what's the problem with the uh... thing?"

"Oh." She says while rolling her eyes at him playfully "My help quit yesterday and I can't figure out how to work the dang thing, and I need the receipt paper changed." She snorts while laughing.

He smiles at her "I'll help you out."

"Thanks, your such a life saver!" She smiles
-
"How could you do this to me?" Max yells furiously "I gave up everything for you, I threw away my whole life just to find you and save you."

"They told me how you are father, you betrayed us all." He grabs Tess's hand. "You did this to yourself."

"Who's they?" Max asks while circling them.

Tess looks at her son then at Max with a look of fear in her eyes. "Just leave us alone Max."

He moves in closer to Tess "I came here for a reason, to save my son and I'm not leaving without him."

"Can't you tell he doesn't want to go with you?" She yells back

"I'm taking him!" He puts his hand up next to her head "Even if I have to kill you."

"You can't kill me Max, can you imagine what that would do to our son?"

The little boy raises his hand and throws Max "Leave before I kill you myself."

Max walks back over toward them and raises his hand to kill them both the lowers it. 'I can't do it.' He thinks to himself.
-
"So how long have you been here?" Billy asks while sipping on a starbucks coffee.

"Hum... about a year." She says while scrunching up her nose.

He smiles "And we haven't met up till now? How exactly is that possible?"

"I don't know."

"So you gotten any gigs yet?"

"Oh ya I play at the regular ol' club every Tuesday, Thursday, Friday and Saturday." She smiles.

"No! I've been there. Do you know how hard that place is to get into?"

"Ya, I'm what they call a regular. Its my uh job." She smirks.

"Really, huh I've been trying to get a gig there for nearly two years!"

"Well, I could talk to Joe about it, maybe he could get you a gig or two."

"Wow, that would be awesome"
-
"Ok its my turn, How long have you lived in here?

"A little over a year, I moved in with my aunt afte-" She smiles "Never mind."

"After what?" Jamie scoots closer "Tell me." She says in a really whiny voice.

"Ok, see I was dating someone."

"Oh this is getting juicy, so tell me was this guy hot or what?"

"Well, Ya." Liz replies shyly "But he um got this girl pregnant." Her expression changes to a frown.

"No, was this when you guys where dating or-"

"Well, not really but, we both always knew we where in love you know?"

"That sucks."

"Ya, so I got upset and came here just to get away."

"Wow, what a jerk!"

"Ya." Liz sighs
-
"So what are you doing in New Jersey?" Kyle asks

"Well, I just needed to get away like you said before. The whole Max and- well anyway after college I heard they had a great shop opening here so I just came and opened it up." She smiles.

"You went to college?" Kyle asks in a confused tone since its only been one year since the last time they spoke.

"Well, not really I just like to say that sometimes." She giggles.

"Oh, right." He smiles. "Anyway um are you dating anyone?"

"No, I haven't been able to since Alex-" She begins to choke on her words "I know it's been a year but I just don't know if I can do it any more."

"What, dating?"

"Ya." She sighs.

"Ya, my dating life has pretty much gone down hill since I left." He laughs at himself.
-
Ding Dong... Ding Dong... Ding Dong... Din-

"Geeze think you rang it enough?" Valenti opens the door fast. "Oh, Max." A giant smile covers his face. "What are you doing here?"

"I was in the neighborhood so I thought I'd stop by." He laughs.

"Ya, right. Why are you really here?"

"I need a place to crash." He says while adjusting the bag strapped across his shoulder.

"Ya, come-on in." He sighs.
-
"So kid, you've been working here a long time."

"Ya, so?" Michael turns looking at his boss with an odd look on his face.

"So, I mean what's your story? You've never really said why you wanted to work here, or where you came from for that matter." He crosses his arms staring up at Michael.

Michael sighs takes off his hat and sits it down on the counter. "Well, I moved from this dumb little town over in New Mexico just to get away and I needed a job... so here I am."

"Ah ha girl friend trouble I see."

"What are you talking about?" He scrunches up his forehead "I don't even have a girlfriend."

"No, I mean that's why you left isn't it? Girlfriend trouble?"

"Well." Michael thinks for a minute "Ya, something like that."

"Ya I figured as much."

"How'd you know that?"

"Hum just a lucky guess." He smiles "So tell me more about this dumb little town."

"Roswell, New Mexi-"

"No way! You mean Roswell as in Roswell New Mexico?!" He yelps sounding exited "I've always wanted to go there! I heard aliens live in that town. So is it true?"

"What about the aliens? Of course not the towns actually quite boring." Michael laughs
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A few years later...

"Look Liz this is our last year of collage we need to get out, meet some hunky guys. I just can't take it anymore being stuck in this little room. We need to have some fun!"

"All right, just let me finish this chapter." Liz says while peaking her head out from behind a very thick book.

"But Liz..." She whines.

"Ok, ok." She closes the book saving her spot with a book mark then sits up on the bed. "Where do you want to go?"

"That's more like it." She smiles.
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"Kyle look, I want Chinese food and you want hamburgers. Lets make a deal we eat my food today and your food..." She smiles then mumbles under her breath. "Some uh other time." She laughs.

"Isabel you always do this to me, but no way its happening again this time it is my turn to pick the restaurant" He smiles.

"Kyle..." She whines

"Look last time we ate your food you promised that the next time it would be my turn."

A few minutes later after they have decided what to eat they reach the restaurant.

Kyle sits down at a table "Tomorrow we have hamburgers." He looks over at Isabel.

She smiles "Fine, but just shut up and eat your Chinese ok?" She says trying to rub it in.

"Ok you mention that one more time and your dead meat Evans." He laughs
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Ring... Ring... Ring...

"Hello?"

"Hey, Liz it's me!"

"Maria?" Liz asks

"Ya, hey look I know it's been a long time since we last talked but I just wanted to see how everything was going down there. You know with collage and everything." She sticks one finger in her ear so she can hear over the loud music that's playing in the club.

"Oh it's um going great, where are you at? It sounds pretty loud."

"Ya, I'm just getting ready to go on stage-"

"Your going to sing?" Liz interrupts.

"Well ya I have been ever since I left."

"Wow, I really miss that. I always loved to hear you sing." She smiles.

"Ya than-"

"Maria, your next so get your ass off the phone and up on stage." A young man says.

"Hey look Liz I haffta go but do me a favor watch some tv tonight I'm sure you'll find something very interesting on around midnight. And maybe I'll call again in a few months ok?"

"Sure, bye." She hangs up

Maria hangs up the phone then whispers "Ya, bye." She sighs then walks up on stage to perform.
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"Amy!" Jim yells while looking out the window. He quickly tucks his shirt in and cleans up before she manages to get to the door.

Ding Dong...

He swings open the door smiling "Amy, hey."

"Hello Jim." She says while walking in "I wanted to see how everything was going."

"Oh, everything's fine... great." He smiles nervously

"Ya, so I got the strangest call from Maria today."

"Really?"

"Ya, she hasn't called me in years and then all the sudden she just calls up to tell me she's going to be on one of those small late night shows." She smiles

"Wow, really? I'll have to watch it."

"Ya I thought you might. I know you guys where kinda close, anyway it comes on tonight at 11 I think." She smiles.
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"Crap, Crap, Crap." Michael says while flipping through the channels. "Hum guess I'll just have to watch this crap." He says while stopping it on the exact show Maria is on.

The tv glares and a picture of Maria covers the screen. Maria DeLuca A New York local who's on the verge of becoming famous. Up next

"Wha?" Michael says looking stunned "Wow." He stares at the tv and turns it up full blast.
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"Liz, it's not even late yet."

"I'm sorry I have to find out what she was talking about. It's driving me insane." She says while flipping through the channels. "We can always go tomorrow I promise." She sees Maria on the tv and quickly flips back. "Wow, she really made it..." She smiles.

"Who?"

"That's my best friend." She says while pointing at the tv.

"Oh, wow."
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"But she never told me that!"

"No, see we are going to miss it because of you, actually we have probably already missed it." Isabel smirks.

"Hey, I just forgot about it that's all, and how do you know if we've even missed it yet? He smirks back

"Look, Kyle just turn on the damn tv." She demands.

"Ya, ya whatever." He turns the tv on just in time to see Maria walking off stage.

"Well folks that was Maria DeLuca, she just put her first album out a few months ago and I think she's good... did you think she was good?" The whole audience yells - "Ya!"

"Danmitt." Kyle sighs knowing Isabel will be blaming this on him for weeks.

"Told ya so." She says playfully

"How is it that your always right?" He laughs.
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"She's good." Jim says while turning the tv off.

"Ya, she was really great." Amy looks down at her watch. "Oh geeze I haffta get home."

"Ya, I'll see ya later." He smiles. "I'll walk you to your car."

"Ok." She smiles

Jim walks her to her car. "Bye." Watches her leave then walks back to his house stepping on a very long nail that was on the sidewalk. "@#%$!" He limps back into his house on one foot sits down and removes the nail. "That's just perfect, now I need a tetness shot." He picks up the phone to call the doctors office. "Ya hey this is Jim Valenti, I just stepped on a nail I need to make an appointment for a tetness shot. Ya ok tomorrow then? Ok ya bye."
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"So she lives in New York now, I just watched her on the tube last night."

"Man, that's gotta suck so she's what famous now?"

"Ya I guess." Michael crosses his arms "You know your really cool to talk to."

"Well thank you." His boss says while adjusting his glasses "So tell me is this girl, pretty?"

"Very, I thought we where in love you know? But this whole big thing happened an-"

"What big thing?" He interrupts.

"Well, her best friend was dating my best friend, and well my best friend slept with the uh lets say 'enemy' of her best friend and so she ended up pregnant. It kinda broke all of us up."

"Wow, so you guys haven't talked since huh?"

"Exactly." He sighs.
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"So when did you get your last tetness shot Jim?" Ida asks

"Um 10, 15... 20 years ago." He laughs.

"This isn't a laughing matter, you should get one every five to ten years."

"Right sorry." He says while sitting as straight as possible

"Le me go get the needle dear, I'll be right back." She exits the room

"Needle?" He whispers and gulps after she leaves
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"Look Nicholas, I have one." Ida states

"Who is it?" He asks

"The ex Sheriff." She smiles

"Great, take this needle I already but the virus in it."

"It won't take too long before every human in this stupid town is infected." She laughs.

"And then the whole world, and then eventually it will infect the royal four... well three." Nicholas says sounding a little more then peeved.

"Oh don't worry dear, momma's gonna make it all better." She smiles then kisses his head and walks out.

"Gross." He whips off his forehead
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"Ok, you'll feel just a little pinch and then it will be over."

"Ah Geeze." Jims body starts getting tense and his face red. "I hate needles." He says almost crying.

"Oh don't worry dear." She sticks him then pulls the needle out "It's all over now."

"Really." He looks at his arm. "Wow, it wasn't as bad as I thought."
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Knock... Knock...

Jim walks over to the door and opens it slowly "Hey Max." He says sounding awkwardly sick and coughing about every other second.

"I tired the door bell but it seemed broken... What's wrong?"

"Oh, I heard the flu was going around. Guess I caught it."

Max walks in shutting the door behind him. "Want me to help?" He follows Jim over to the couch and sits down next to him.

"Na, I'm--" Coughs a lot "Ya maybe you should." He laughs.

"Ok." Max shrugs and puts his hand on Valenti. His hand begins to glow healing him.

"Max!" Jim yells before falling off the couch onto the ground.

Max bends down next to him "Hey are you ok?" He begins to shake him. "Wake up... Wake up?!" He runs over to the phone and dials 911.
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"Look Liz, its nearly 9 o'clock we should get going."

"Fine." She lays her book down on the bed. "I'm ready lets go." She smiles.

"Your going like that?"

"Well, ya why wouldn't' t I?"

"Ok, give me 10 minutes and I'll be ready." Jamie says while running to the bathroom to fix her face and hair.
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"Your on in 5 minutes."

"I know."

"Well act alive sweet pea."

"Sweet pea?" She turns looking at him "Since when do you call me sweet pea?"

"Since now." He smiles "Now get up on that stage and sing your little heart out."

"Ya ya." Maria walks out onto the stage "How is everyone felling tonight?" "Fine." The audience yells back "Ok well I'm gonna sing the first single off my new album, here it goes." She begins to sing a soft mellow song.
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"Come-on Isabel, It's my turn and you know it." Kyle smirks

"But we had pizza just last week." She bats her eyes at him trying to get her way.

"No way your going to win this, I say pizza and that's finale."

"But Ky-" She begins...

Ring... Ring.. Ring..

"I'll get that." He laughs "But that doesn't mean this argument is over." He picks up the phone. "Hello?"

"Kyle, Its me Max. We need to talk."

"Max? How in the hell did you get my number?"

"I looked it up, but that doesn't matter just listen to me for a minute."

"You have 10 seconds, then I'm hanging up... 1...2...3..-"

"Your dad's in the hospital." He interrupts.

"What?" Kyle asks stunned

"Look something happened to him, I don't know what but you need to get down here quick."

"Ya, ok." He hangs up. "We aren't eating out, we have to go."

"Why'd Max ca-"

"Something happened to my dad Isabel."

"Oh my God." She gasps
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"I'm outta here."

"Later Guerin." His boss calls to him.

"Ya later." He walks home and plops down on his bed and slowly falls asleep.
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(From chapter one)

"Come on we have to go!" Liz called from across the hall

"All right, All right I'm coming!" Jamie yelled while putting a jacket on and heading out the door to meet Liz in the hallway outside their dorm room.

"Look, If we don't leave now w-" Liz gets interrupted by the telephone

"I'll get that, Its probably for me anyway." Jamie rushes back into their room and picks up the phone "Hello?" she turns looking at Liz "Ya, here she is."

Liz takes the phone and speaks into it "Hello?" she hears a voice, it sounds so familiar...

"Who is it Liz?.. Your boyfriend?." Jamie laughs

Tears start to form in Liz's eyes "Ya, I'm on my way." She hangs up to look at Jamie

"Liz what's wrong?" sounding deeply concerned
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Kyle walks in the door of the night club to see Maria up on stage singing her heart out...

"You know I'm better breathing on my own." Maria looks out into the crowd after finishing her song to see Kyle standing near the door way of the club. She rushes off stage to meet him "Kyle!"

"Hey." He says plainly

She hugs him "Kyle It's been like forever." She smiles

He doesn't smile "Ya, Hey Look we have to talk."

She frowns "Kyle Is something wrong?"

He leans in close to her whispering something into her ear looking visibly upset

She puts her hand over her mouth and gasps "No..." Her eyes fill with tears

Kyle grabs Maria into the form of a hug as she cries on his shoulder

Isabel who looks like she's been crying for well over an hour walks in the club "Kyle." She says softly

He releases his hug on Maria and turns looking at Isabel

She lowers her head "We should go."

"Right." He replies "Maria please say you'll c-"

"Of course, I'll uh follow you guys up." She interrupts

Michael's phone rings waking him up

He rolls off his bed onto the floor hitting his head "Dammit!, Who's calling at this hour?" He picks up the phone "Hello?"

He hears a familiar voice...

"Michael there's someth-"

"Maxwell." Michael interrupts

"Look, I know we haven't talked since t-"

"Save it Maxwell." He interrupts again "I don't want an apology from you."

"Michael will you just shut up and listen?" Max begins "That's not why I'm calling."

"Fine then, Just get to the point."

"Something happened..."


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  I will Remember you Parts 1-4
 Posted: 04/24/02 09:15
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~Chapter 3~

Liz lifts her head up from her day dream, she fell asleep somewhere in between everyone fighting and everyone crying.

"Kyle, Lets just go." Max says in a stern voice.

"He's right Kyle, this isn't your fault." Isabel says while trying to smile.

"Your right." Kyle takes a step closer to Max till he's right up in his face. "It's his."

"Ky-" Max begins.

"No, Max this never would have happened if you hadn't slept with her."

Liz turns her head sharply looking at Max.

"What does that have to do with anything?" Max asks.

"If you hadn't slept with Tess, I never would have left. The only reason..." Face starts getting red "My father would still be alive today if I didn't leave."

"Kyle, It's not his fault... It's not anyo-" Isabel begins.

"No, he's right." Max interrupts.

"What, No Max..." Liz stands up with her arms crossed.

Max looks at her then turns back to Kyle "No, I mean he's right about Valenti." Voice starts to break "He's dead because of me."

Maria stands up and walks over toward them. "Enough with the blame game ok?"

"I went to his house the day..." He pauses "He was so sick." Max says getting very upset "I tried to heal him, I thought it would make him better but..."

"But?" Maria asks.

"It-- I made him worse, Kyle's right I-I killed him.."

"I can't believe this!" Kyle says sounding furious "How could you not tell me this?"

"Kyle, I am so sorry. I didn't kno-"

"Sorry? God Max he was my father."

"Kyle, Please just listen to me."

"NO! You listen. You just stay the hell away from me!" Kyle storms off down the hall.

Isabel looks at Kyle then Max, she then follows Kyle down the hall. "Kyle, wait." She calls out while running down the long dark hallway."

"I-" Michael slaps his hand over Maria's mouth before she can get another word out. "Lets go." He says harshly while shooting Max one of those evil looks. They follow Isabel and Kyle down the hall.

Liz bends down picking up her books.

"Liz." Max says softly.

"Look Max, I have this test I need to study for so..." She stares down at the floor not once looking up at him.

"Oh, right." He says sounding hurt.
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"Max, Kyle?" Valenti walks around his house and checks all the rooms to see if anyone's home. "Where is everyone?" He pauses for a moment thinking where they could have all gone too. "The hospital." He grabs his jacket and walks out the door.
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Half an hour later...

"Hey, guys I'm back." Liz walks in Valenti's house and shuts the door with her foot because her hands are so full of books. "Maria? Isabel, Michael, Kyle... anyone?" She sighs then sits down on the couch spreading her books out so she can get some studying done. "Guess I'm alone."
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"Let me buy you a drink." A young, tall slightly drunk man says.

Isabel turns to face him "I already said no."

"Oh come on, It's just one little drink." He says slurring his words together.

"What part of no don't you understand?" She says harshly then moves her hand slightly making his drink tump, spilling all over him causing him to take his attention off her. She then pushes her way threw the crowd to find Kyle sitting at the counter getting drunk. "Kyle, God I've been looking all over for you."

He turns looking at her "Oh hey Isabel..."

"Kyle, you can't keep doing this."

"Doing what?"

"You can't just drink away your problems."

"I'm not drunk Isabel." Kyle says sounding very drunk. He gets up trying to walk to the door but stumbles.

"Not drunk? Right..." She mumbles then helps him out.
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Mike hands Maria a cup of coffee then sits down next to her on the old discolored couch.

"Thanks" She says after taking a sip.

"No Problem." He flips the TV on. "Oh hey, I saw you on the uh late late show the other night."

She blushes "I sucked didn't I?"

"Na, you where great."

"Really?"

"Trust me, I don't tell to many people that their great."

"Thank you Michael." She smiles.
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Max slips on a doctors uniform, waves his hand over the id to put his face on it then walks down the hall till he comes across the door saying in big bold letters MORGUE. He opens the door and walks in, after looking for a few minutes he finds a drawer with the name Jim Valenti Jr. printed on it. He begins to sweat, he then places his hand on the handle and slowly pulls open the long cold steel drawer. Max grabs the sheet covering the body and pulls it back slowly reviling a tall slightly thin man with dark brown hair and dark eyes, he looks around the same age as Valenti. "How is this possible?" He looks back at the name to make sure he opened the right drawer and it still reads Jim Valenti Jr. Max pauses then whispers "Bradley" When he hears a noise he quickly covers up the body and shuts the drawer.
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"No, they came here to see me. I was a patient in here earlier, I was just released this morning." Jim says while leaning over the counter.

"Oh." She looks up from her computer screen. "Is your name Bradley Jones?"

"No. Look lady, I told you I was in room 103."

"Well, the only person released from that room today was Bradley Jones."

"I'm Jim Valenti... Uh!" He says getting very frustrated.

"I'm sorry I couldn't help you sir."

"Ya ya.." He puts his cowboy hat on and walks off down the hall.
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Liz walks out of the bathroom with a towel wrapped around her hair. "Hey guys, you got any-" She stops when she sees Michael and Maria asleep on the couch. She sighs then walks back into the bathroom and shuts the door.

Isabel and Kyle barge in the door "Someone help me get him to the chair." Isabel says while practically holding Kyle up.

Liz walks out of the bathroom. "Isabel?"

"Ya help me will ya?"

"Oh ya." She jumps over to where they are and helps Isabel put Kyle in the chair.

"Oh, h-hey Liz." Kyle says.

"Hey." She scrunches up her nose. "Are... are you drunk?"

"No of course no-" He burps loudly, then begins to laugh.

"He's drunk, trust me." Isabel sighs heavily then sits down on the arm of the chair next to Kyle. She glances over to the couch seeing Maria asleep with Michael. "What's up with those two?"

Liz shrugs "I just came out of the bathroom and found them like that.
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Max slips out of a room carrying two files. As he walks down the hall he hears a familiar voice.

"Now, don't worry you'll just feel a little pinch."

He peeks his head in room 132. He sees Ida with a needle in her hand and a young girl with fiery red hair. He walks into the room. "What the hell are you doing?"

Ida stops to look up at Max. "You." Points at the young girl. "Out, now."

The girl looks at Ida then walks out of the room.

"I knew you'd come back."

"What did you do to Valenti?"

"Oh you mean your little sheriff friend? I just gave him a little shot." She smiles.

Max takes a step closer to her. "What kind of shot?"

"Oh you'll find out soon enough, when your body starts to break down. Everyone on this pathetic planet will eventually break down and die... Well, everyone human that is, and since your half human..."

"Why?" Max asks.

"We knew once every human was dead, it would be easier to find you."

"We?"

Nicholas enters through a door on the other side of the room "We."

"Nicholas." Max says without even turning to face him.

Nicholas raises his hand making the door behind Max slam shut. "I've found you at last."
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"Would you like to see the body?" A middle aged women asks.

"Yes." Kyle says in a very weak voice.

"You don't have to do this Kyle." Isabel says while trying to comfort him.

He looks up at her "I-I want to."

The nurse pulls open the long steel drawer, but it's empty. "I know this is the right one." She pushes it back close then reads the name again out loud "Jim Valenti Jr.? Is that your father?"

"Ya." Kyle says. "What's going on? Where's his body?"

"Let me get the doctor." She exits the room then comes back a few minutes later with a tall young man beside her. "He's completely gone... like for if he vanished or was stolen or something." She says sounding frantic.

"Let me have a quick look." He pulls open the drawer then closes it again. "Call security."

"What's going on?" Kyle asks.

"Your going to have to wait outside."
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Kyle and Isabel enter the waiting room.

Maria stands up. "So..."

"His body..." Kyle begins sounding horrified.

"They think someone stole his body." Isabel says.

Maria gasps "Why would someone do something so sick?"

Liz and Michael walk in carrying five sodas. "Here." Michael hands one to Maria one to Isabel, and one to Kyle.

"What's wrong?" Liz asks while looking at Maria's red face.
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"Kyle?" Valenti walks in his empty house and looks around for any sign of life. "Danmitt is anyone here?" He sits down on the couch. "Am I in the twilight zone or something?" He sighs then flips the TV on.
-
"They found their bodies in room 132."

"How'd they... What happened?"

"I heard that they found a silver hand print on each of their chests." The young man whispers.

"My god, You mean there's one of them... things in the building?"

Max walks past the two young men trying to act as normal as possible.

One of them turns looking at Max as he passes. "Hey wait."

Max turns and try's smiling normally "Ya?"

"Can I see some ID?"

"Oh ya, sure." He says nervously then shows him his badge.

The guy looks at it for nearly five minutes. "Ok, you can go."

Max sighs then walks off.
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"What do we do now?" Maria asks in a horrified tone.

"We just... wait." Isabel lays her head on Kyle's shoulder.

"I can't just wait here pretending everything's fine." Maria says.

"Ya, me neither." Michael crosses his arms and stands beside her.

"We can't just leave." Kyle says.

"I know I just, I need to do something. I'm going crazy just sitting here doing nothing." Maria picks up her purse. "I'm going to the cafeteria."

"Maria, wait up." Liz stands up and gathers her things following her.

"Any other takers?" Maria asks.

"Ya, I have to get out of this waiting room." Isabel stands up and sticks her arm out in front of Kyle. "Come on Kyle you have to eat."

He just shakes his head.

"Danmitt Kyle, your coming rather you like it or not." She grabs his hand and yanks him up.

"Ok, ok fine. Geeze."
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"He was pronouced dead at 4:15 this morning." Max says in a whisper as he flips through Valenti's file. He sighs then opens up Bradley's file. He runs his finger up and down the page searching for anything that could help him find Valenti. "Salt tablets?" He says while reading aloud.

"Excuse me where's your cafeteria?"

Max perks his head up when he hears Liz's voice. He closes the files and peeks his head out of the door way.

"Oh it's just straight up ahead." A young tall slim doctor points.

"Cafeteria? What are they still doing here?" Max asks himself.
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Maria giggles "What about the time when.."

"Excuse me, Kyle Valenti?"

Kyle looks up to see the same doctor from the morgue. "Ya?"

"I'm doctor Corbun, we met earlier." He extends his hand.

Kyle stands up and shakes his hand.

"We found the body."

"Where was it, I mean did someone steal it or-"

"We believe that your father and his room mate somehow got switched."

"What do you mean, switched?"

"If you'd just come with me please." The doctor and Kyle exit leaving everyone else in the cafeteria silent.
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"Unknown illness." Max walks into a room where a young fragile girl lays limp in the bed. "Hey." He picks up her file and flips it open skimming through it to find out she has the same symptoms Valenti did. "I'm doctor..." He looks at his badge then back at her "Wilson."

She lifts her head up and coughs.

"Oh here, I think if you take this you'll feel better." He hands her a salt tablet and a glass of water.

"Where's my doctor?"

"He's um, on his break right now he asked me to give you this."

"Oh." She takes the pill and swallows it with a big gulp of water.

"Now, I'll come back and check on you in a half hour to see how your doing ok?"

"Ok." She lays her head back down.

Nearly an hour later Max walks back into the room to find the girl sitting up in her bed watching TV looking stronger then ever. "You feeling better?"

"Oh doctor I feel wonderful."

Max smiles then turns when he hears foot steps.

"Excuse me, this is my patient." An elderly doctor says, then he looks at the girl sitting in the bed. "What happened to her?"

"This doctor saved my life." She says while pointing at Max.

"How'd you?" He begins.

Max hands the doctor a bottle full of salt tablets. "Give every patient with her symptoms one of these."

The doctor takes them and stares at the bottle. "But these are just salt tablets."

"It's what I gave her." Max looks at the girl then walks out of the room.

The doctor stands there looking shocked.
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"Your right, that's not my father." Kyle says in a very plain voice.

"Somehow your father and this guy." The doctor covers the body back up. "Got mixed up."

"So you mean my father's still alive?" Kyle asks.

"We did release someone from that room this morning, It had to be your father."

Kyle smiles. "I'll go by his house, maybe he's there."

The doctor exits the room with Kyle as they both walk into the waiting room where Liz, Maria, Michael, and Isabel are waiting for them. The same middle aged nurse walks into the waiting room "Doctor! Doctor! It's a miracle!" She yells.

"Jan calm down, what Happened?" He asks.

"124 patients Miraculously recovered."

"What?"

"Doctor Truman said a mysterious young man healed one of the patients with a single salt tablet." She says in a whisper. "So he gave them all just one pill and they are all being released today." She squeals.

Liz glances at Maria and Michael then Kyle and Isabel. They all exchange an 'It was Max' Look then exit the waiting room. They are all practically running down the long hall when Liz spots Max dressed in a doctor's uniform. "Max?"

He turns when he hears Liz's voice. "Hey."

"We heard what you did." She smiles.

"How'd you know I did it?" He asks

"Because I know you Max."

Max turns to look Kyle in the face. "Kyle."

"Max I"m sorry I, yelled at you earlier." Kyle scratches the back of his neck.

"Your dads-"

"Still alive, I know." Kyle interrupts.

Isabel, Michael, Maria and Liz all exchange looks and say "What?" at the same time.
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Kyle barge's through the door to find his father snoring on the couch. He runs over to him and hugs him. "Dad!"

Valenti try's to sit up but can't because Kyle is practically on top of him. "Kyle, Get off me."

"Dad, I thought you where dead."

Everyone else enters the room and one by one they all hug Valenti. "How are you feeling?" Liz asks.

"I'm great." Valenti says then turns back to Kyle. "Ok now, you thought I was dead?" Laughs out loud. "Kyle you have to be kidding me, I wasn't even that sick. Why would you think something like that? Didn't the hospital tell you I was released?"

Kyle exchanges a look with everyone else. "Long story." He sighs then hugs his father one more time.

awww FEEEEEEED ME! TBC...


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  I will Remember you Parts 1-4
 Posted: 04/24/02 09:16
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Dont' worry this is the last chapter and it's short I swear.

~Chapter four~

"Max?" Liz gently lays her arm on his shoulder causing him to turn around looking at her big brown eyes.

"Hey." He says in a soft voice.

"Look Max, I just wanted to thank you before I went back..."

"For what?"

"Not only did you save Valenti's life but, you saved all of our lives." She smiles.

He sighs heavily. "But it's my fault he was sick in the first place."

"Max, just be glad it's over."

"I knew something was wrong, and I just... I had to do something."

She reaches out and takes his hand. "I'm glad you did something." She smiles.
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"Ok, tell me the part about the morgue again." Valenti says while cracking up.

"Can't you ever take anything seriously?" Kyle asks.

"I'm sorry son, It's just... you really thought I was dead all that time?"

"Well, ya."

Isabel walks back in from outside. "Car's all loaded."

Kyle stands up and looks at his father. "Dad..." He begins.

Valenti stands next to him. "Look, I know you've made a life for you and Isabel. I understand, go." He smiles.

"Are you sure?"

"Just make sure you call this time... or write... and if your crazy maybe you could visit once or twice."He laughs

"I will, I promise." He hugs him then walks out side with Isabel.
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"So, I guess you should be getting back to Cali." Maria says.

"Na, it was never really home for me..." Michael says with a blank expression on his face.

"But you've been living there like the past few years, how can you say it's not 'home'."

"I've never felt like... I had a home before you... and them after... I just..."

"Where are you gonna go?"

He turns looking at her. "Look Maria are we... can't we just try to work things out?"

She stands up. "I'm sorry..." She turns to walk away but he grabs her arm. "Michael look, I want to really, I do but how do you know things would work out?"

"Maria, just give it a chance. Please."

"How could this possibly work, I live in New York and you live..."

"In New York., I'll move there so we can finally be together."

Isabel, Kyle, Max, and Liz walk over to Michael and Maria.

"So you guys are leaving now?" Maria asks.

"Ya, but at least we are all saying goodbye this time." Kyle smiles.

"Max..." Isabel pulls her brother into a hug. "I love you."

"I love you too Iz." He smiles with a tiny tear in his eye.

Maria looks at Max and Liz holding hands. "Liz, I'm so sorry I never visited you or even called."

Liz drops Max's hand and hugs Maria."It's ok."

Maria smiles. "Call me as soon as you get to Florida ok?"

"I will."

Max hugs Michael, Kyle, and Maria then takes Liz's hand as they walk off.

Kyle smiles at Maria. "I'll come by the club sometime to watch you play." He hugs her.

"That would be great." She then hugs Isabel. "I guess I'll see you two around then."

"Ya." Isabel sighs.

"Bye."

Isabel hugs Michael, then Kyle hugs him leaving him pretty weirded out by the fact that everyone is actually getting along. Michael takes Maria's hand as they walk to her car. Just then Amy shows up.

"Maria!" She grabs her daughter into a hug.

"Mom!"

"You leaving already?" She glances at Michael in the car then back to her daughter.

"Ya."

"Oh well I just came by to give Jim this nice cherry pie I baked for him this morning." She smiles. "I know he's been sick and I just wanted to..."

Maria laughs at the fact that her mother and Kyle's father are together now.

"Bye Mom." Maria gets into her car and follows Isabel and Kyle who's driving behind Liz and Max.

"Amy!" Jim walks out of the house to great her, then he sniffs in the air. "Is that a pie I smell?"

She blushes. "Why yes it is."

"For me?" He smiles as they walk into the house.

The end he he... Feed back please!


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 Posted: 05/02/02 10:31
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Wow. This is a really great fic, Mary... Please hurry and post more! :)


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 Posted: 05/09/02 04:38
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Wow, I'm glad you like it. I posted another one of my story's it's called Disaster Zone if you want to check it out.

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