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Part one of this story can be found here:
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This "roadtrip" takes place after Destiny in the episodes.. when Maria and Max decide to go on a roadtrip to get away from the misery.

Rated R for strong language and adult situations.

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Maria: Spicy
Max: Bunniefuu

(post coming soon!)


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She pulls around like a wild woman, screaming to get in.
She looks over as if to say "What did you do?" and I can't help but to give her the glance and shout, "DRIVE" as the cops wailed on our tail.

I held onto the Jeep handle as she frantically made her way out of the parking lot, heading towards the highway.

No.

This wouldn't work I thought to myself. They would catch us on the highway. In a moment of dispair I reached over and grabbed the wheel, turning it sharply towards the right, turning the Jeep into the woods.


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Maria screams.

"Oh my GOD! You... we... what... tree!" She swerves just in time, and continues to drive erratically through the woods, her hands shaking.

"I cannot believe the police are chasing us, okay, what did you do? I mean, they couldn't have known what we did because, and did they see me? Oh my god, what if this is on the news? What if... they show my face, and Michael sees it? Oh my GOD what if my MOTHER sees it? I am so screwed, we are so screwed, I think I just swallowed a bug or something, and I really have to pee."


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OMG--
LAUGHING MY ASS OFF!
:drink :drink :drink :drink :drinkers :drink :drink :drink :drink

That last line just killed me with hysteria. :lmfao :lmfao

*runs off to think*


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I look at her for a moment intently as she goes on and on talking uncontrollably. Her hands shake along with the wheel that jumps in every direction as the Jeep moves on the rugged ground.

In all the excitement that surrounds her, in her blurred scared rambling, in the way that her hair blows wildly in the wind, I can't help but to grin slightly.

I try to interrupt her mid-sentence,

"But.. we didn't do anything..."

She's screaming now about Michael... about TV... about her Mom...

And then she finishes with a bug... did she say she swallowed a bug? I glance back over at her to make sure she's okay and she announces she has to pee.

"Pee? Have you lost your mind? Maria. MARIA?! This is how this started! You having to pee! You can't be serious. I mean... Now?!"

She turns to say something and then I scream,

"WATCH OUT!"

Panic overtakes me as a ravine of some sort sends us over an edge.

Down

It was a large hill and I desperately try to help her keep control of the Jeep.

And then it's too late as it jags to the left... turning... turning... flipping... stopping.

As the Jeep begins to flip, I can feel her body as it falls onto me and I can't help but to protect her as my arms wrap around her neck and the back of her head. The impact was hard as we landed, our heads hitting the roof of the Jeep as it lays upside down.

Her body is trembling slightly and I can feel her hot breath as it exhales onto my neck.

mmmmmm...

I look down at her gently as our faces come almost too close and whisper,

"Are you okay?"


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OH. MY. GOD.

And that's the last thought Maria can maintain before they roll downhill, trying desperately to control the jeep. Max grabs onto her just before they come to a stop, and she is thankful because otherwise she could be dead.

"I don't know. Who are you?"

As Max's face pales slightly, his eyes widened in disbelief, she grins.

"Kidding. Uh, my head hurts, though... my back is killing me, and I think I sprained my wrist and ripped my jeans, but other than that... alive."

She takes a moment to breathe deeply, first in, then out again.

"You?"


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i like this:wavey i hope u guys come back and update this:missu and i hope ma/ma get together and fast:thanx


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Hey Mz Ruthiey, welcome to the board (cause I think I failed to say that so far)! :welcome I agree, Bunnie and Spicy do a great job with this, but I think they know that if there is an GZ action here they're both gonna be in serious trouble. And I am not only speaking for myself here (hopefully). LIZ! Back me up, girl. ;)

Should I be concerned? :glare


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:fd

The only thing you need to be concerned about is Max, because he's about to get beat up by a girl... :lol


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:glare :glare I don't believe one word... If Mz Ruthiey says it, there must be something you have conveniently forgotten to mention to Michael and me... :glare


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i didnt mean to get anyone in truble i was just letting the writes know i like there fic. but i have to ask a ? this is the ALTERNATE REALITY board then y isnt it aloud to have a MA/MA fic cause in a Alternate Reality they might have gotting together. i just saying cause i'm a GZ fan myself but i like candy too so you know. anyways if they continue this or not it was a good fic:sadwave


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MZ RUTHIEY~ Welcome aboard! :welcome
:wavey :wavey :wavey :wavey :wavey :wavey

And Thank You for the feedback! :love :love :love
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I didn't actually think anyone was reading it... except for Stalker up there (and don't mind her-- she hates GZ and just gives us a hard time :lol ).

Anyway, wanted you to know (and Maria up there also who's been waiting so patiently) that I'm still thinking of the next part and promise to have it posted by tomorrow night! ;)

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HEY! What'd I do? :lmfao :lmfao :rollin


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"Um... yeah."

Was all that I could manage to get out as she exhaled again onto my neck. Her body was still laying on top of me in almost an upside down position. If it was any other time than now, if she didn't still love Michael, if we didn't have this whole past, I'm not so sure I wouldn't have caved at this hidden desire. I'm not so sure I would have wanted to leave this position so quickly.

Focus..

I was still worried that she was in fact okay. Thank god we had the windows rolled down all this time as I looked down at her and spoke,

"Do you... um... think you can climb out? Can you move?"


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Um, I know this might sound wrong, but I'm honestly trying to clarify something here... didn't Max land on top of Maria? :thinking


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I don't know? :dunno I'm only assuming? :(

Want it the other way around? I can go edit? :dunno

Oh god. I feel like I'm asking permission for the top or bottom. :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao


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:grinclap :grin clap:grinclap :grin clap:grinclap :grin clap COME BACK WITH MORE AND I DONT CARE WHO FALL ON WHO CAUSE IF I HAD MY WAY I WOULD BE ON TOP:lmfao


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Well, I was asking because when the incident first occured, you implied that Max landed on top of Maria - then you switched it, so... :lol Was just wondering ;)

MZ RUTHIEY :thanx


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Actually, I sort of read it the other way around-- I thought I had implied that she landed on top--

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But I honestly don't mind, I can edit if you want it the other way around, really.

Now then-- your turn to post! :lol :lol :love


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But then you said -

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:thinking


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:lol :lol Well, I used that cause she's smaller than me? Meaning I was thinking her head was at my neck (not face to face) so he was looking down? Do I need to change this too?:dunno

You do realize if I change this, you're asking for trouble. :drink :lmfao


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