CORY! *tackles*

OMG, OMG! Liz posted! *ecstatic dance* Off to read.

Jenny - Thank you, but look who's talking! Tess is pretty amazing herself. I think that you and Bunnie captured the scene so well, and the imagery is very vivid - great!

OMG!

CORY! I missed you, damn it! I was so excited to see you posted that I got jumpy, and I think I broke my chair, but it's okay 'cause you wrote an amazing part!

I see! Good post; you don't give yourself enough credit.

Stalker, thank you.

Yes, bring Max back.

Well... see... I got past the Sex part just fine... but then got stuck on the Slave part.. and well now... I'm thinking

Go Alex and Isabel!

Whoa, Bunnie, heavy stuff you posted there! Well done! Isabel's going "What? NOW? Thanks for giving us warning, Max." with dripping sarcasm and the desire to beat him senseless for not bothering to give advance notice about this.

Thank you Zook! You know actually, I had it planned alot differently- I was wanting Max to actually get home and have this huge brother/sister moment when Nacedo showed up. But it didn't go exactly that way since I wasn't sure if I was even continuing at that point. And then I thought well I could wait till Isabel gets home, but ultimately thought- "No, he tends to screw up no matter what he does"
Sort of comes with the price of "King" I've realized. So, if that is what Isabel is thinking-- it's exactly her and I envision it as well! Tomorrow shall be the conflict of days!