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Okay, please don't hurt me, this was so nerve-wracking for both myself and Maria that it's horrible, and I'm sorry if Michael doesn't like it - we promise to fix it later. 
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Yay, Maria! Damn, girl, I think I'm gonna tie you up and lock you in the ER for the rest of your life! Shut up, Michael.  Ignore the boy.  *off to read, dragging Michael along* Bunnie -  Sorry!  I just meant that I remember that we started out by writing mere dialogue, not text in the sense of the word. You'd say "Come on Michael, I'm starving", and I'd reply - that would be our entire post.  The text-element didn't come in until Michael the idiot had to play with a fork, I think. So I wrote in in third person that he was playing with a fork. And I thought that Max initially only had the dialogue, and everything else was for instantce: "( starts sneaking glaces over at Liz)". So that would naturally be in third person...  Is it less confusing now?
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Ok, we're back! That was awesome... Michael is stunned, and my brain is fried due to the papers, so I need some time to think... 
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No, no, no, it was horribly... horrible. Yeah, I like those words together, they sound funny if you say them slowly But, thanks Tell Michael he already locked Maria in the ER, so all he needs to do now is tie her up  As long as he stays with her 
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Michael turns into a scary guy if you leave him alone for too long.  But I'll tell him. I don't think he's gonna leave. I happen to like the part. Michael didn't get to say anything about it because his jaw was hanging three inches above the floor. 
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Hey, I feel stupid. I went looking and no Michael post. I'm in la-la land again I think. 
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Max?! Where the hell did you go? Maybe he should post tonight... 
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Okay, becaus I haven't posted in, like, ages, I'm gonna go ahead and post what I've got. But I'll hopefully be back tomorrow with some more. I've just got a pounding headache that will not let me write anymore right now. 
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SpicyAlejandra
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Quote: Quote: I went looking and no Michael post.  Um, huh? Yeah, I guess no post... You should definitely check the start of the RPG; it was so cute! BTW to be in Roswell-Lala-land is not known as a bad thing... 
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Quote: Quote: Um, huh? Yeah, I guess no post
Yeah, I'll say so.  You can't just go *saying* things about the post to come, and then not post it. Get back here and post it already! 
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jbangelo
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Quote: Quote: Headache? At a time like this?
Yeah, I know, how do you like that? Quote: Quote: Ah well, hope you don't mind my post. Sort of felt like Kyle needed to take the lead back.
Are we on the same wavelength or what? I was thinking about moving them into the bedroom too! Love the post. 
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SpicyAlejandra
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bunniefuu
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Quote: Quote: Ew.
Okay, now see-- *normally* I wouldn't mind this so much-- but Spice--  Dude, I *intentionally* did NOT write that part with NC 17 just so you wouldn't go *eww*. I *tried* to write it with the "fade to black" scenerio. Shouldn't I get an "A" for effort here? Or am I just doomed any which way I go? Quote: Quote: Yeah, I know, how do you like that?
Well... I guess I'll make sure not to tell Kyle this part.  Poor guy. Quote: Quote: Are we on the same wavelength or what?
Depends really... I mean... would that mean that you would be sick and twisted too? Oh, and 
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SpicyAlejandra
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No, no, no, don't be offended. It's okay  I was just "ew" because, well, it has nothing to do with either you or Jenny, I just accidentally got a visual, and... ew  both 
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