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Author: | Former Member [ 06/07/03 14:36 ] |
Post subject: | The Memories Stay |
There is a candle it burns right well Shining bright in my heart it dwells But the wind it came strong and stout And blew that bright burning candle out My heart stopped beating when the phone rang I heard the news as the salt tears sang The blast it shook me to the bone For now he'll never be coming home I see him coming through the door I hear his steps stomp across the floor I hear his voice whisper soft and clear As my fingers feel my hot wet tears In the window a candle burns bright Calling him home in the dark night The pain may fade as the years go by But the memories stay in my heart nearby copyright 2002 Nathan Tompkins |
Author: | bunniefuu [ 07/10/03 14:49 ] |
Post subject: | The Memories Stay |
Somerled- that has to be the saddest thing I've read. This part especially broke my heart-- Quote: Quote: But the wind it came strong and stout And blew that bright burning candle out Reminds me of this little guy-- Just waiting in the dark all alone. So SAD! |
Author: | jbangelo [ 07/11/03 09:58 ] |
Post subject: | The Memories Stay |
Beautiful! |
Author: | Alien Stalker [ 07/11/03 12:25 ] |
Post subject: | The Memories Stay |
Nathan - This is amazing. I love the imagery. |
Author: | destinyros2005 [ 07/12/03 03:55 ] |
Post subject: | The Memories Stay |
Nathan, that was beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. |
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