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whiterose1986
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Post by whiterose1986 » 10/09/03 06:17

Tears, they fall, landing in the emptiness unseen.
Silence shouts out louder than the screams I wish to hear.
The blood is pounding in my brain,
I don't want to feel the pain.
All the raspy why's dance in time to the soundtrack of my life.
This is the life.
Wandering around, lost inside.
Scared to walk the next step, too much terror to stand still.
The devil and the innocent rage on.
Tenderness and torture locked in a waltz,
I want to lay the blame, but I own the fault.
Tears, all mine, are worthless.
Silence has no remorse.
The pain will hold me in a lovers embrace.
Smiling softly it has your face.

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Post by jbangelo » 10/09/03 07:27

whiterose1986, welcome to FD! Thanks for sharing your writing with us!

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Post by bunniefuu » 10/10/03 02:30

whiterose1986~ Welcome to FD!




That was beautifully written!
I loved the ironic groupings!
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Silence shouts out louder than the screams I wish to hear.
OMG. Awesome line!

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