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| Author: | Last Star [ 02/23/02 06:16 ] |
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A Secret Untold Category Max/Liz and others Summery AU Max, Michael and Isabel are aliens. Liz, Maria, Kyle and Alex have a secret that is going to be known to their alien friends. Disclaimer I don't own Max and co. However I do own Katie, Ricky, Jenny, Anne Marie, Marcus, Julie and Matthew. Author's note: please leave me feedback. Part 1 In a small house near Roswell there were four siblings (Ricky aged ten, Katie aged nine, Jenny aged three and Anne Marie aged two) huddled together. The two younger sisters were asleep. Katie asked her brother " What are we going to do Ricky? I mean we can't stay here forever and I know Marcus won't turn up. Even though he has looked after us for five years. " Ricky answered " I don't know Katie." Then suddenly Ricky's face lit up. He had a idea . "Katie" he asked his sister " Do you remember auntie Liz , auntie Maria, uncle Alex and uncle Kyle"? "Yes, I do. Are you thinking what I am thinking?. "Yeah why not." Ricky said while smiling " I am sure they will help. I have got her number lets give her a ring". "Great. I can't wait to see auntie Lizzy". Ricky walked over to the phone and dialled the number. In Roswell The pod squad were in Michael's apartment spending some time together. Then all of a sudden Liz's mobile phone started to ring. Liz picked it up and answered "Hello, Liz speaking" "Er, hi auntie Liz. It's Ricky Hayes. I hope I am not calling in a bad time. It is just that we need you help". "Ricky O my god are you okay"? As soon as she said Ricky. Maria jump up and shouted "Oh @#%$. I hope they are okay. I never trusted Marcus". Alex and Kyle went over to Maria and told her to " Be quiet." Max, Michael and Isabel just looked shocked and wondering what the hell is going. Maria, Alex and Kyle crowded round Liz. "Okay Ricky, here is what I want you to do, packed your and yours sister's things and Alex and I will be there in about an hour. "Okay, I love you auntie Lizzy. Please hurry." "I will I promise. I love you too Ricky" And then Liz put the phone in her pocket, and then grabbed her jacket. At the mention of the words I love you too.' Max face was filled with jealousy. " Liz, what happened are they all right?" Maria asked. "I don't know but Ricky sounded upset. Maria, can I use you Jetta ? Its just that it will be safer for the others. "Yeah sure" as Maria got her keys out and gave them to Liz. "Thanks". She turned to the others and spoke "Look guys, Alex and I have to go out for a while. Can you all meet us at the Crashdown and we will fill you in the best that we can? Maria, Can you get some blankets out of my bedroom? I have a feeling we will need them." Maria nodded "yes." "Liz, What is going on? Max asked. "Look Max, you have to trust me." Liz give Max a quick kiss and left with Alex in tow. Part 2 The gang piled in the jeep and Kyle's car went over to the CrashDown. When they got there. Maria got her keys out and open the main doors to the café and spoke " Hey Kyle, I need you to make hot chocolate for our new guests, while I get the blankets "Okay I am on it" replied Kyle Maria went to the back and Kyle went around to kitchen while Max, Michael and Isabel sat down in their usual booth. "So Kyle, where is Liz's parents." Isabel asked "I think they decided to go on holiday. They won't be back for five weeks." "Oh okay." said Isabel. A couple of minutes later Maria came back with a arm full of blankets. Michael and Max started to question Maria while Isabel went to help Kyle. "Maria, what is going on?" Michael asked Why won't you tell us?" Max questioned "Look guys, we can't tell you till Liz gets back." Kyle replied while coming out from the kitchen with a tray of cups full with steaming hot chocolate. 10 minutes later Liz came in with Jenny fast asleep in her arms and handed her to Maria who wrapped her up in a blanket and laid her on one of the booth seats. Liz then disappeared again and Alex came through with a sleeping Anne Marie and Maria did the same as Jenny. Alex disappeared again as Liz came through with Katie and Ricky who as soon as they saw Maria and Kyle they ran to them and shouted quietly "Aunty Maria, Uncle Kyle I missed you". Alex came though with the children's bags and sat down next to Isabel. "We have missed you to sweetie now Uncle Kyle has made you both some hot chocolate so go and take a cup each and sit with your sisters." "Okay Aunty Maria" Ricky said. And they both walked to where the drinks were. "So Liz, who are the kids?" Max asked l |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 02/23/02 10:41 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Last Star~ Wow! What a great first post! Thank you so much for posting it! I really liked it! Hurry up with the next part (some people around here take too long kidding) LOL..Oh and Welcome to FD! Make yourself at home
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| Author: | Last Star [ 02/23/02 14:16 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Thank you bunniefuu. for making me feel welcome. I have written the parts up to 5. I am half way through part 6. Here is part 3 enjoy. Part 4 will be up if I get more feeback. Part 3 Okay before I tell you what's going on Alex and Maria can you take the kids and put them in the two guest bedrooms please? "Sure chica". Maria replied. They took the kids up stairs. When Maria and Alex came down they were all sitting down Liz began to tell their story. " Okay, Maria, Alex and Kyle and myself are adopted. "What"? Max shouted "You got to be kidding?" Michael spoke Isabel just looked shocked. "Guys calm down and I tell you what happened. " As I said we were adopted. Alex is my brother and Maria is Kyle sister" We were placed in a children's home in Florida. There was another one of us that was with us she was Alex's and mine's older sister Julie. The children are Julie's". As Liz said this she had tears slowly steaming down her eyes. Alex sat beside her and put his arm over her shoulders Maria decided to take over as she knew this was too much for her best friend. She knew that when Liz started to tell the story she would need Alex. " Julie was murdered and Liz found her in her room and she just had enough life left to asked us to look after the children and not let Marcus have them. Marcus is the children's father. "And he murdered Julie, the mother of his children" Liz suddenly shouted causing the whole group to look as Liz. "Liz we don't know that. Kyle started to say "Of course we do she told me" Liz spoke quietly "What Liz ?" Maria asked sounding hurt that her best friend had kept something important from her. "When? Why did you not tell us?" Kyle asked sounding shocked. "I did tell someone" and she looked at Alex "Yes she told me When we got back to the hotel room from the hospital. We agreed that you guys should not know till you need to. Alex told everyone He took a big breath and looked at Liz who nodded. "There is something else Julie had a silver hand print on her chest. She told Liz that Marcus is an alien and should not have the children because he will take them back to his planet and use them to take over a neighbouring planet Antar." "Which is your planet Max" Liz spoke quietly. There was a shocked atmosphere around the room. The door to the back of the apartment opened and caused everybody to look at the door. A sleepily Katie entered the room "Aunty Lizzie" he spoke " I woke up" Liz ran to Katie "are you okay sweetie?" " No you know when I was little I had those vision things?" "Yes Katie" Liz sounded worried." Did you have one?" "Yes Aunty Liz it was horrible" "Can you tell me?" Katie shock her head " No" " Okay do you remember that I can connect with you like we did when you were about five" "Yes okay" Katie answered "Liz are you sure you should be doing this?" Alex asked. Liz turned away to face Alex and the others. "I am not sure of anything now" Liz what do you mean by connect with him" Max asked confused. You are all human aren't you? Isabel questioned All of a sudden the front door to the café opened and in walked a man Liz, Maria, Kyle and Alex knew. "No they aren't human" The man spoke . |
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| Author: | ChrissyP47 [ 02/24/02 13:07 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Wow... this is really interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next. You have to post more soon. -- |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 02/24/02 14:51 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
OMG that is so good, you got me at the end I have goosebumps now. I love the idea of this, more, more, more    LOL
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| Author: | Last Star [ 02/26/02 07:27 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Thanks for feedback. I am giving you two parts. I am still writing Part 6. I am not feeling well at the moment so I don't know when it will be posted so please bear with me. Part 4 Maria, Kyle Alex stood up and went over to Liz and put Katie behind them. "Hello my dear old friends how are you?" The man's voice sent chills down everyone's spines. "We were never your friends" Liz spoke with a tone that Max has not heard before and it scared him "Who are you?" Isabel spoke. She had an idea who this man was and he gave her the creeps. "Well well well look a what we have here. Can it be Zan. Rath and Vilandra? Let me introduce myself I am Marcus. Beth knows me don't you?" He said looking at Liz. " Don't you dare call me that." Liz spat out "No one calls me that." "Oh yes someone does or should I say did. Beth?" Marcus questioned sarcastically. He knew how sensitive Liz was when someone mentioned her sister. "You have no right talking about Julie that way." Liz spoke in a angry tone but she was careful not to let him get to her or she would probably use her powers and then she would expose her and her brother and her two best friends. "Well I think I should go and come back soon but I'll leave you with a warning . Beth you and your friends and family better watch your backs. Cause just when you least expect it I will be back and I will kill you and the people in this room and I take the kids and then Kiver will be proud of me". And then he turned to go out of the door laughing evilly. "Oh @#%$, we are in big trouble" Alex said after a few minutes of silence. "No kidding" Kyle chimed in. "Guys quick trying to turn this into a joke this is serious" Maria almost shouted. "Aunty Maria" A scared little voice squeaked from behind Liz . " There is something wrong with Aunty Lizzie, she is shaking. "O my god Liz are you okay" Maria spoke and put her arm around her Max wished that he could be the one to calm her down and comfort her but some thing made him knew that she needed Maria. He was confused at Marcus's words. Why did he call her Beth and why did he make it known that she was not human. But now was not the time to bring it up. "Its over. We are finished" Liz wispered quietly with tears running down her cheeks. "Liz we are not finished". Maria spoke trying to calm down her friend. "Do you remember Matthew"? Kyle asked Liz carefully waiting to see her reaction. Part 5 Liz's face lit up at the mention of Matthew "Do you think Matthew would help us" Maria asked the group. Meanwhile all sorts of thoughts goes around Max's head. Who is Matthew? Why did Liz's face light up at the mention of his name? Micheal: Who is Matthew? Do we have to have another person in our group? Isabel: Who is Matthew? I wonder if he is going to cause trouble for Max and Liz. I hope not. "Liz why don't you give him a call"? Alex asked "It would not hurt to asked" "Okay I'll be back in a minute. Liz then got the walk about phone and dialled a number while Katie sat on her lap. "Hi Matthew it's Beth Parker" Liz spoke into the phone. "Bethy how are you"? A concerned voice spoke to Liz " I am okay but I need your help. I sort of got Julie's children he at the café. Liz spoke and then pulled the phone away from her ear waiting for the shouting to start. "WHAT ARE YOU CRAZY? HE IS GOING TO KILL ALL OF YOU. HOW THE HELL DID YOU GET THEM?" A voice bellowed on to the phone. Liz sent a grin to the others and replied" Ricky phoned me and told me. So Alex and myself went to pick the children up. Marcus came in the café a bout five minutes ago and threatened us. Can you come to Roswell and help us sort the children out? There is something else but I tell you when you get here. " All right, I'll be there tomorrow afternoon. Take care. Bye." "I will and thanks." Liz spoke then she put down the phone and turned to the others." He will be here tomorrow." "Good". Alex spoke relieved "Look guys its getting late. Why don't you all spend the night here. There will be enough room." Liz asked the others. She did not really won't to be alone tonight. She was really scared about what happened with Marcus but she had to be strong for the children. "Yeah that's a good idea." Max told Liz. He did not want to her to be on her own especially after what happened with Marcus. Max, Alex, and Kyle went to call their parents and told them that Max was staying over at Michael's and Isabel was staying over at Liz's and Kyle told his parents that he was staying over at Michael's. Maria did not have to call Amy DeLuca cause she was already staying at Liz's. Liz was just about to put Katie to bed when she heard all the children's feet quietly padding down stairs. "What's going on guys you are meant to be in bed". Liz asked the children. "We woke up. Can you, Aunty Maria, Uncle Kyle and Uncle Alex sing us to like you used to." Ricky asked Liz. The rest of the guys came in when they heard there names being called. "Okay before we decide to do that kids I want to introduce you to some friends of ours. This is Max, his sister Isabel and Micheal." "Hi every one. Com'on Aunt Liz it will be fun" Katie asked her eyes shining brightly. "All right Ricky why don't you get my spare guitar out of Liz's room" Alex told Ricky who quickly ran into Liz's room. "Okay I suppose we should do this" Liz spoke uncertainly. She had stopped singing awhile ago. The last time the group sang was at Julie's funeral They all sat down in the sitting room with Katie surprising everyone sat on Max's lap. Ricky chose to sit on Michael's, Ann Marie sat on Isabel's lap and Jenny cuddling next to Isabel and Micheal. TBC? |
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| Author: | ChrissyP47 [ 02/26/02 12:53 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Wow, what is going on with them? I am so curious as to what is going on. Please come back and post more real soon and I hope you feel better. -- |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 02/26/02 20:24 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Okay, first I've been dying to tell you that I just love your sig. I really like this story, I'm dying to see what happens next with Matthew coming tomorrow, and why Marcus called them all different names, like the background story...can't wait for the next part Once your feeling better that is.
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| Author: | Last Star [ 02/28/02 07:23 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Author's Note. Chrissy: thanks for your fedback it means a lot. Bunniefuu I am glad you like my sig and I glad you like my story. I am feeling a lot better thanks. Any way here it goes. Disclaimer I do not own this song Part 6 Alex starts playing while Liz sings. Look at this stuff isn't it neat Wouldn't you think my collection's complete? Wouldn't you think I am the girl, The girl who has everything Look at this trove treasures untold How many wonders can one cavern hold Looking around here you'd think Sure she's got everything Max just looked at Liz and was amazed at her singing voice. He had no idea that she could sing so beautifully. Maria: I've got gadgets and gizmos of plenty I've got ooze its and what's its galore Want thingama bobs? I got twenty But who cares no big deal I want more Michael looked at Maria and thought she looked and sounded beautiful. I can't wait to get her alone. Liz and Maria I want to be where the people are I wanna to see them Wanna see them dancing Walking around on those What do you call them? oh feet Alex: Flipping your fins you don't get too far Legs are required for jumping, dancing Strolling along down a What's that word again? Street Up where they walk Up where they run Up where they stay all day in the sun Wondering free wish I could be Part of that world Liz: What would I give To spend a day warm on the sand Betcha on land they understand That they don't reprimand their daughters Bright young women Sick of swimming Ready to stand Isabel just stared at Alex. I never knew he could sing. I knew he could play, but sing? Wow. Kyle: I'm ready to know What the people know Ask them my questions and get some answers What's a fire? And why does it What's the word? Burn When is it my turn? Wouldn't I love Love to explore the shore up above Out of the sea Wish I could be, a part of that world Maria: What would I give To live where you are What would I pay To stay here beside you What would I do to see you Smiling at me Up where we walk Up where we run If we could stay all day in the sun Just you and me And I could be Part of your world Liz: I don't know when I don't know how But I know something's starting right now Watch and you'll see Someday I will be Part of your world After the song they noticed the children were fast asleep on their partner's laps. Liz and the gang put the tired children to bed and then Max and Liz went to Liz's room, Isabel and Alex went into Liz's parent's room, Kyle slept on the couch in the lounge and Michael and Maria went into the other spare bedroom. In Liz's Room "Wow Liz that was wonderful. I love you Liz." Max spoke, smiling at Liz as she went into her bathroom to get ready for bed. "Thank you Max. I have missed singing. I love you too." She went over to kiss Max and then Liz and Max curled up in bed and were soon asleep. Michael and Maria: "Maria" "Yes Spaceboy?" "Who's Matthew? "Era very old friend of ours." "Why did Liz's face light up at the mention of his name?" "Micheal, can we not talk about this? Good Night Spaceboy." "Okay. Good Night my pixie." Maria turned off the light and snuggled next to Michael. Isabel and Alex: "Alex do you love me?" "Iz I do. You know that." Alex kissed Isabel and they went to sleep with a smile on their faces. Kyle thoughts: I am lonely. I wonder when my soulmate will return to me. I feel that she is close to me. And Kyle drifted off to sleep, dreaming of his mate. ************************************************************************Meanwhile A tall dark haired guy was driving down a road, coming close to Roswell. In the car he was talking to a girl. "So Serena what are you going to say to Kyle when you see him?" "I don't know. I only hope he will remember me. I have been waiting to meet him all my life, and the time has come." TBC? |
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| Author: | Last Star [ 03/05/02 04:22 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Part 7 Liz and Alex's dream: Alex and Liz are alone in the dark woods with a white mist floating across the ground and they both hear a male voice that they do not recognize. "There will be a sister who will die." A sister who will leave her children to be raised by her sister, brother and their friends. Their soulmates will take on their role as a parent. A female person wearing a white gown shows up and smiles at Liz. "My darling daughter you and your soulmate King Zan now called Max Evans, have been chosen to raise the second oldest child. Raise her well and keep her way from harm." She then turns to Alex and smiles. "My dearest son you and your soulmate Princess Vilandra, now called Isabel Evans, have been chosen to raise the third youngest child. Raise her well and keep her away from harm." ************************************************************************ At the same time Maria and Kyle have the same type of dream but this is what happened. A different female turned up and smiled at Maria and spoke "My darling daughter you and your soulmate Rath, now called Michael Geurin, have been chosen to raise the oldest child. Raise him well and keep him away from harm" She then looked at Kyle and smiled and spoke "My dearest son you and your soulmate Luranne, now called Serena Harrison, have been chosen to raise the youngest child. Raise her well and keep her away from harm." ************************************************************************ Meanwhile in Max, Michael and Isabel's dream They were in the same woods with the same white mist and they heard the same prophecy. A women appeared and she looked at Max and Isabel. " My children I knew this day would come. Michael you were like my son and you were my son's best friend and you still are. Michael you have a sister and she will be joining you shortly. Max, you were called Zan and my daughter you were called Vilandra, Michael you were called Rath and your sister Serena was called Luranne. There is something you all need to know but you can't tell your partners till the time is right. Liz's sister is not the mother of the children. In the other time you were all married to your partners and the children were yours. Max, Isabel and Serena had daughters and Michael you had a son. You must all protect your children and soulmates." "So I belong with Liz" Max asked hopefully. "Yes my son and Isabel belongs with Alex, Serena belongs with Kyle and Michael you belong with Maria. God bless my children and good bye." And she vanished. ************************************************************************ The next morning Liz and Maria opened the Crashdown and they started their shifts along with Michael who was doing the cooking. Alex and Kyle, with the help of Isabel and Max, got the kids up and dressed and then brought them down to the Crashdown for breakfast. Katie had grown quite attached to Max and sat on his lap. Max felt a strong fatherly need to help Liz look after this little girl. "Max, what can I have to eat?" Katie asked Max was just about to answer when the bell on the Crashdown rang and the door opened revealing Matthew and Serena. TBC? |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 03/10/02 14:28 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
OMG! I just LOVE THIS  Please Please Continue... I died laughing over the song, it was just to perfect.. and I was shocked with the mention of Serena (damn those Roswell writers, they SO need to take a hint ) and I love the dream sequence.. so let me guess, that Liz, Maria, Kyle, & the kids have this secret and on the flip Max, Michael, Serena, & Is have a seperate secret and neither knows the other yet. How great is this! LOL.. Hurry up with the next part
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 03/18/02 04:29 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Part 8, Part 8, Part 8
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| Author: | Last Star [ 04/27/02 01:17 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Hiya I have finished part 8a and I am waiting for it to be sent back from beening edited. Thanks for the feedback. With any luck I should have it back soon. Thanks for reading |
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| Author: | Last Star [ 04/29/02 01:09 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Enjoy and please leave feedback Part 8a Liz looked up and saw a familiar face. "Matthew?". She wispered. "Bethy. Wow you have not changed" Matthew spoke and threw an arm over Liz's shoulder and hugged her tight. Max looked at Matthew and noted there was something about him that he did not like. Liz, Matthew and Serena walked over to the booth where Isabel, Max, Kyle, Alex and the children were sitting. Max pulled Liz onto his lap as Katie moved off Max's lap and sat beside him. Max wanted Liz as far away from Matthew as possible. Matthew spoke "Hello your majesties, My name is Matthew and this is Serena." He pointed at the red haired girl. "Hi everyone" Serena spoke nervously. She was terrified that she would not fit in and be rejected by the others and the three most important people of her life. Her brother that she missed so much and her child that she has been chosen to look after with Kyle. Kyle her soulmate. "oh please let him remember me." Michael came out of the kitchen as soon as he saw Matthew and Serena. He felt a brotherly pull to her and walked over to Serena "Hi, I am your brother" "You remember me? " Serena asked shyly. "Of course I do. It came to me last night." Serena threw her arms around Michael's waist and cried " Oh Michael I missed you so much. I love you." She sobbed. Michael had his arms round his long-lost sister and spoke "I missed you too and I love you and we will never be spilt up again, I promise" The others watched with happy smiles. Kyle coughed and everyone looked at him wondering why he was spoiling the moment between the siblings. Michael looked at Kyle and realised that he needed to speak to Serena. "Serena, I'd like you to meet Kyle." "Why don't you take Serena into the back room and talk, Kyle" Liz interrupted. "Okay Liz," Kyle spoke and led Serena into the back. "Look everyone, Michael, Maria and myself better go and get back to work or we will get fired. Why don't the rest of you take the kids and Matthew out and get to know each other" Liz suggested. She wanted Max and Matthew to get along. She felt that Max had a strong dislike for Matthew and she did not understand why he had bad feelings toward Matthew. Max put his arms around Liz and pouted, "But I want to stay here and watch my beautiful girlfriend work." "No, Max please spend sometime with Katie and Matthew. Please? For me?" Liz begged. "Okay, Liz" Max replied disappointedly. "Katie, go and get your jacket, and Anne Maria's jacket." Liz ordered the kids. "Okay Aunt Liz. What about Jenny and me"? Ricky asked worriedly. Ricky had to look after his sisters when Marcus took them away. So he was very protective toward his siblings. "Don't worry Ricky you and Jenny can stay and help Maria and myself. You both will be okay". Ricky seemed happy with the idea and Katie went to get the jackets. Max went over to Liz and drew her in for a long kiss. Liz suddenly got a feeling of jealousy, which came from Max. She realised that it was from yesterday, when Liz was on the phone to Ricky and he heard the words "I love you too." Liz broke the kiss and looked at Max.. " You thought that Ricky was my secret love?" Liz asked amused Max blushed and nodded " Max listen to me. You are the only one that I have ever been in love with, and I will always be. Please believe that." " I do Liz. And it is the same for me. I just got a bit silly." Max spoke. Max then doved in to kiss Liz again. A loud cough broke the two lovers apart. It was coming from Michael. "Are you two love birds done?" Michael asked, amused. Everyone was trying hard not to laugh. Liz and Max blushed, nodded and reluctantly broke apart. Katie came back with the jackets. Liz helped Katie put her jacket on. Isabel helped with Anne Marie. She was feeling motherly all of a sudden.. Liz kissed Max then Katie and wispered quietly in her ear "be good for Max okay?". "I will aunt Liz. I love you." Katie wispered back and kissed her on the cheek. And then they left. Liz ran to the door and called out behind them "be back at closing time." Max nodded and then they left. |
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| Author: | destinyrebel [ 05/02/02 10:37 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
You know, I remember this fic from a little bit ago, so, I was very happy to read what I missed and remembered... Please hurry with more! 
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 05/06/02 05:23 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
 Yay! I loved that part and sure have missed you Star! Can't wait for some more. 
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| Author: | Last Star [ 05/19/02 00:01 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Okay here's the deal. I have done part 8b and sent it to be edited last week and I have not had it back. Do you want the part unedited now or do you want to wait till it has been edited? Its up to you please let me know. I have also finished Part 9 and I am halfway through Part 10 |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 05/19/02 01:50 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Star! It's so nice to see you again!  Normally I would be all over you posting it. But you might want to wait since most everyone has left the boards for the next 3 weeks until renewel. But we will all be back on June 14th. . I can't wait to read it!
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| Author: | Last Star [ 06/11/02 03:45 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
Part 8b Meanwhile lets see what is happening with Kyle and Serena. As soon as Kyle showed Serena into the living-room. Serena sat down next to Kyle. Inside they were both nervous "So" they both said together and then looked at each other and laughed. But then it became very serious. "I didn't think it would be this hard to talk to you" Serena said to Kyle "I know. I have so much I wanted to say but now I can only think of one thing to do" Kyle agreed. He moved, and kneeled down infront of her. He took both of her hands in his and looked straight into her eyes "What is this Kyle?" Serena asked curiously. She too was staring into his eyes. She felt her insides filling with butterflies. She was so nervous. "This" Kyle swooped down and captured Serena's lips in a soft but meaningful kiss. They suddenly felt all their nervousness fade away, all their feeling of loneliness disappeared. All that was left was love and passion. They just cuddled on the couch for a while. No words were spoken they did not need to be. All of a sudden, the door came open and in toddled Jenny, she looked around and smiled when she saw Kyle and ran over to him and Serena. Kyle opened his arms and Jenny climbed on to his lap. "Jenny, this is Serena" Kyle introduced Serena. "wello Rena." Jenny spoke. "Hello Jenny" Serena answered her new daughter. " Wuddle" Jenny said as she lifted her arms Serena automatically knew what she meant and picked up Jenny and held her tight and smelled her hair. Oh how she dreamed of this moment, holding her daughter to her. Kyle watched with a smile on his face. His two favorite women hugging each other. I will never get tired of watching this he thought. "C'mon lets go and see what the others are doing" Serena followed Kyle into the front of the Crashdown and sat in the booth with Jenny still clinging to her. **** Ricky was helping Michael in the kitchen. Liz smiled as she saw Kyle, Serena and Jenny walked back in to the Crashdown and sat down. Kyle had his arm around Serena. "Hey chica, watcha looking at?" Maria asked her friend as she came over to Liz. "Oh Rustina, I was just watching Lurannae and Kauan together with Beka. They look very happy. I am glad Kauan chose her" " Liz what did you call me? And who is Kauan and Beka? Maria asked with a puzzled face. "Oh my God. I am remembering bits of our past life". Liz realized. " Wow. So I was called Rustina. That's a cool name." Maria commented. "You know something Maria? I think I am starting to remember the other's names." "Wow that's great. I think. Wait a minute. We are due a break. So lets get some paper and a pen and work out who we were called and then we can show everyone what we were called in our other life. Maria suggested excitably. Part 9 At the park Max was pushing Katie on the swings. "Higher, higher. Max please" Katie cried. "You don't want it to be too high Katie you might fall." Max told her. Alex and Isabel were also taking turns pushing Anne on the baby swings. She was giggling, having the time of her life. Matthew was watching Max and Katie on the swings and decided to go and have a chat with Max. "Hiya Max", Matthew greeted with a fake smile. "Matthew," Max greeted back aware of Matthew's fake smile. "So, you and Liz. Are you together? How long ? " Matthew asked. Interested in the involvement of the Queen and the King. "Yes we are and we have been involved for 1 year now" Max did not need to think about it. "Wow, that's not long. I mean I thought you both would have been together a lot sooner." Matthew commented trying to sound surprised. He was eager to learn all he could about .Max. So he could put his plan in motion. "Yeah well we have been friends for 9 years. I know I loved her from the first moment I saw her I was only 9 at the time. When I met her I did not tell her of my alien status, because I was afraid that she would turn her back on me." Max explained to Matthew. He was starting to feel very uncomfortable around him. He never opened up to anyone other than Isabel or Liz before. Why is he suddenly telling him what his greatest fear was and still is ? That he would lose Liz and he can't bear to think about that. Max soon realized that he had to get Katie back to Liz. So he left with Matthew, Katie, Alex, Isabel and Anne. When they arrived it was closing time and the Crashdown was cleaned and Liz, Maria, and Michael, Kyle, Serena, Jenny and Ricky all sitting at the booth looking serious and Liz was writing something down. As soon as Liz spotted Max, she ran straight into his arms and he held her looking concerned and worried "Liz what's up? Max asked. "Max just hold me please." Liz whispered. Max held Liz and looked at Michael who was holding Maria. "What's happened" Max asked Michael "Liz is starting to remember bits and pieces of our past life on Antar." Unknown to the rest of the group Matthew's face looked more concerned than the others. "What? But how Liz?" Alex asked his sister. "What do you remember?" Isabel asked worriedly. She knew about Vilandra from Congressman Whittaker when she took Liz away at Isabel's birthday party. Whittaker told Isabel that as Vilandra, she betrayed her brother. Liz walked over to Isabel "Izzy you did not betray Zan." "What? Really?" Isabel spoke, shocked and relieved with tears streaming down her face. Alex had his arm around Isabel's shoulders. Anne was on Alex's hip asleep. "All I know is that you did not betray Zan." "Liz what else did you find out?" Alex asked "I think before we talk about this it might be a good idea to get the kids to sleep." Max picked up sleeping Katie and he and Liz took Katie upstairs along with Alex, Isabel sleepy Anne, Kyle, Serena with Jenny asleep in Kyle's arms, Maria and Michael holding Ricky who also asleep. Matthew stayed in the café's booth and thought I better let Siver know what is happening. That for some reason Reanna is remembering things. Matthew then got out his phone and dialed a number unaware that Max and Michael were listening. Author's Note: More on Thursday |
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| Author: | bunniefuu [ 06/15/02 15:04 ] |
| Post subject: | A Secret Untold Parts 1-18 & New Parts 19 and 21 |
 I just loved d those last lines. Totally unexpected. Also, loved the part with Kyle & Serena  Can't wait to read the next part. 
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