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Oh, okay, I get it now :lol I think it'd be best to leave it as it is, as long as nothing comes up :ohno :drink

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"Yeah, let me try. Ow."

Maria slowly crawls out of the jeep, bumping her head on the way out, and falls kind of abruptly onto the grassy ground of the bottom of the hill. She watches as Max slowly follows, and makes it out almost as easily as she did.

"Look, I'm... sorry I crashed your... and, I could pay for the..." Maria shuffles her feet as she talks. She's not very good at apologies, especially the kind where she has to apologize for wrecking someone's car.


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Ahem... yeah, see that's why he was rushing to get her to get off him, I guess you get it now... :lmfao :lmfao :lmfao


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Well, of course - it's me ;)

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I mean - :smack :lol :lol :loveu


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love the fic:wavey hope u guys up-date soon:sadwave :missu


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She starts going on and on about how sorry she is... as I look at the Jeep.

No big deal.

And then she catches my eye as she turns and tries to hide the limp.

"Maria... come here. You hurt your leg... didn't you? Are you sure your okay? Come on... let me see it..."


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"Maria? You're not okay are you?"

I could tell she was trying to cover it up so I walked over to her and spoke,

"Here... sit down... let me just look, okay?"


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Sweet Jesus. I think my leg is sprained or something.

"No, it's... fine. I'm okay."

But she sits down anyway, insisting that her leg doesn't hurt, even though it does - she just wrecked Max's car, and now he's going to think she's trying to fake an injury to get out of some sort of lecture.


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I kneel down next to her and can see where her leg pant is torn revealing her knee which is scrapped up pretty bad and bleeding.

For some reason I can feel the extreme nervousness radiating off of her as she sits in almost too much of silence.

She's fidgeting.

"Maria... look at me. What is wrong? It's okay... I promise... tell me."


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Maria looks at Max. Says nothing, and bites her bottom lip.

"Okay, so it does hurt. And I wrecked your car, and now we have no way to get around, because I can't even walk properly, and so now I ruined your whole trip or run away thing, whatever this is now, and we're stuck in the middle of... somewhere... I'm hot, and thirsty, and..."

She tries not to cry. Very hard. But a tear escapes her eye and she wipes it away.

Great, now he thinks I'm a whine-ass. Everyone does, why not Max too? One more friend to pity me. Go DeLuca.

"I'm sorry."


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I can't help but to laugh a little as I responded,

"Hey... no, no look at me... *smiling* Did anyone ever tell you how cute you are when you go on and on? Huh?"

I noticed tears beginning to fill her eyes as I continue,

"Listen to me... you didn't ruin a thing. What? You didn't. If anything you've made the last day more exciting. "

*coughs*

"So... come on... tell me... which shall I fix first? "

She looks at me dumbfounded as I continue laughing,

"Let me see your leg, I'll fix it. And stop worrying about the Jeep. We can't use it even if I did fix it. I mean, look where we are... the middle of a forest practically. So, let me take care of your knee and then we'll walk. Okay? "

I look down squinting, trying to make her crack a smile and finish,

"Okkkayyy?"


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"Cute? This? No. Maria DeLuca is not cute. The ditz, everyone says - the wacky best friend to perfect, beautiful, Liz Parker."

She then looks at him.

"I'm sorry. I just... keep saying that, don't I? Yeah... look, you don't have to fix my leg, but it would be really nice if you could. Thank you."

She then tries her best to smile as he raises his hand up over her leg, a glow radiating from it...


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Not one moment after I healed her leg I could hear the sirens approaching.

I stood holding my hand out to her and replied,

"Come on... we've got to go..."


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Uh-oh.

Maria grabs Max's hand and is pulled to her feet. Surprisingly, the pain is gone. She looks up at him and murmurs,

"We're gonna have to run."


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THAT WAS GOOD CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS TO THEM I HOPE THEY GET TOGETHER:wavey


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Sadly, I have checked and cannot find the url for the Part three of this story and all the posts from this thread. Ezboard has stated this:

Q. There are replies within topics on my board that are invisible, and new replies in that topic don't show up either. What can I do?
A. Invisible replies within a topic may be caused by replying to a corrupt post. To get around this, use the top "add reply" button rather than the bottom one. You shold only need to add one reply in that method to get the thread working again. At this point in time the invisible posts will still be invisible however. We are working on a fix for this bug which will make any invisible replies show up in the topic.

Q. I still have some invisible topics at my board, can you get them to show up?
A. An invisible topic is one which has been restored and can be accessed with a direct link, but does not show in the topic listing. If you can provide the url of a topic that you can access, but does not show up on the list please post it, and we can reload that forum. Reloading will only make invisible topics visible, but will NOT restore anything beyond what is already restored.

If we can find the url to part 3 they might be able to find the 'invisible' post, otherwise a large part of this story is gone and is therefore impossible to continue/re-write. :( My apologies.


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Don't apologize - you didn't do anything wrong.

I'm just disappointed that we lost so much, because we worked so hard... I mean, from what I can tell, this is just after the first car wreck. That's a lot missing :(

I guess it's just a lost cause, maybe we should delete all of it :dunno


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